Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Written Task 1 Rough Draft

Letter to the Editor – Rationale
Alia Oumeish

We all know Amy Winehouse, she is one of the most famous women of her generation, unfortunately she passed away due to some bad experiences that occurred that were expressed in her songs. I found an article discussing this, it is an online magazine and this article discusses her authenticity and personal issues that was published only 2 days after her death in July of 2011. I will also reference two of her songs ‘Back to Black’ and ‘Rehab’ since they both portray the context the identifies with language and identity, proving that Amy uses language in her songs as a way of opening up to people about her issues, which proves that she is an authentic singer.
The test time I have chosen is a letter to the editor of Salon.com online magazine, I will write two letters to the editor, one acting as a concerned mother of a crazed fan of Amy’s, who is supportive of the negative comments being said about Amy Winehouse, and the second letter as the actual fan who does not see the bad in her role model. I chose this arrangement because I think it is the best way to include arguments both for and against what’s been said in an interesting yet appropriate matter. 
This specific article about Amy Winehouse would obviously be directed towards fans of hers, and frequent viewers of the magazine, and the purpose of my response would be to prove that Amy Winehouse was authentic throughout her music and to further explain the different opinions of the people.









Amy Winehouse’s authenticity
Mrs. Lannister
1st August 2011
Dear David Daley, Editor in chief of Salon.com online magazine

As I was walking past my daughter Anna’s bedroom I over heard them talking about Amy Winehouse and fussing over the negative things that have been written about her on your online magazine, and I have to admit I was very curious as to see what all the hassle was about, and after reading your article I have to agree fully with everything being said, Amy Winehouse was a troubled singer and it is very obvious throughout her songs, as mentioned in your statement “Amy Winehouse’s darkest days were well-documented, and the tone of the coverage”. I agree with this statement because every single one of the songs I hear my daughter Anna listening to includes some sort of inappropriate language about drugs and alcohol and other inapt substances that Amy Winehouse was exposed to.

I am fully aware that many celebrities are exposed and resort to drugs and alcohol abuse etc. but many of them get the help they need before it is too late, as you mentioned earlier; “Winehouse sang, salty and teasing, outing herself — gallantly, even — as a devotee of excess. “They tried to make me go to rehab, I said ‘No, no, no,’” she proudly insisted. Her voice was tough, unapologetic.” She full on admit to needing rehab in one of her songs then admitted to refusing to go, now what kind of mother would want her daughter to admire a person like this? You have to understand the worry I am going through, my daughter looks up to this person, but Amy Winehouse is definitely not a person to be looked up to.

In my experience I'm aware that many younger people of this generation are exposed to illegal substances, and my daughter Anna is only 16 and sees Amy Winehouse as a role model and doesn’t realize that Amy Winehouse was very troubled, and while my daughter and many others seem to think that all of her music is just based on silly words that rhyme and sound good, but in reality she is being authentic in her songs, she actually is talking about her experiences with drugs and substance abuse, but many people do not realize the honesty behind her lyrics.



Amy Winehouse’s Authenticity
Anna Lannister, her biggest fan
2nd August 2011
Dear David Daley,
I have to disagree with everything being said in your article, I think its just dishonest opinions about a certain celebrity, in hopes to get a lot of hits on the magazine.

Also when you stated “The rate at which the public gobbled up glib Winehouse headlines (Amy Winehouse Performs Drunk and Falls On Stage! Drunk Amy Winehouse Gives Worst Performance In History!) was in line with both the extraordinary number of records she sold and the precise content of those records.” I just think that as a a celebrity she must be faced with many pressures and will obviously lead to substance abuse to help ease her stress, and I do not think she should be judged for it, as long as she is singing the song properly which is what people paid for, she shouldn’t be insulted.
Also when stated “Critics continue to insist that authenticity, as it applies to art (and especially performance), is a sucker’s bet — it’s a hollow construct, an impossible ideal, a dangerous, nonsensical presumption.” In the article, I think that authenticity is a very important trait to include in ones music and art. I think Amy was just trying to make her songs more real, which is what makes it more special. I really do not think that being authentic is something to be judged for.

The only thing I probably agree with in this article is this part “. Addiction is a fundamentally different kind of hardship, but Winehouse’s life wasn’t charmed. She had credibility, suddenly, and that trumped everything else — race, circumstance, and origin. She made dozens of unforgivable professional and personal mistakes, but no one could accuse her of being full of shit.” I think this opens a new argument about Amy Winehouse that I probably should not get into, although I have to say that the last part of the sentence was very accurate, because no matter what Amy Winehouse was real, she was a genuine. She spoke about the harsher things that many other artists feared to open up about, when she sings you could hear the honesty behind her lyrics. Which is why I love her so much, just a few months ago when I went to her concert during her slower songs I nearly teared up from the sadness I could hear in her voice.

Yes I will admit she has made many mistakes throughout her life, and her death ironically was a mistake, she overdosed just last month. It happens to many people, but what I cant wrap my head around is how miserable a person could be to have to have that much drugs, I couldn’t imagine how much pain she was trying to numb. Don’t get me wrong I know that it was very immoral and was not a pleasant death, I also know that substance abuse is extremely dangerous and illegal, but it’s a hard addiction to break, I don’t think anyone should be judged negatively because of a mistake that cost their life, because no one really knows what she was going through. “That Amy Winehouse never had the chance to betray her music is the saddest kind of epilogue.”



Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Cultural Appropriation Letter - Nicki Minaj

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To, Raf Lurv

8th october 2014

i have to agree with everything stated in the text, nicki minaj says in one of her songs "asalamu alaykom who the fuck is akbar, give him my keys tell him park my car"

asalamu alaykom in arabic is basically a greeting, and then she says who the f*** is akbar, akbar is a respectful way to say god, the she follows it by insulting him by referring to him as a vallet.

i dont think she meant any harm, i think Nicki Minaj just meant it as a joke or she really didnt put much thought into it, but even though i am not a muslim, i understand fully how it can be insulting to islam and muslims/arabs, or basically just anyone who believes in god because akbar means god, and many religions believe in god so i believe it is insulting to them all dont you think?

because many people who are religious respect god fully and their faith keeps many people going through hard times, and seeing someone so effortlessly insulting their most respected figure, could be seen as very rude.

something i agree with something said in particular "don't think it is appropriate for her to put such line in her song." basically saying that its okay for her to have her own opinions, just that she shouldn't advertise her negative thoughts if she knows that many people will be offended by it. 

another statement i agree with was "the line where she says "give'em my keys tell'em valet my car" can possibly means? From what I understand it can means 2 things. First she is referring Akbar to a person who work at valet parking, which illustrates that muslim is not doing well in life and  work for other richer people like her. " it took me a while to understand this line in the song and i think it was very well explained here, and i think this just shows how disrespectful some people get when they are introduced to all the fame and money, i agree fully with everything stated in this article and i believe that people should keep their opinions to themselves.

-Alia Oumeish
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